|Reviews for 22|
| cecyouyed chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
This is awesome.
I love the ryme and rhythm in this.
The imagery is also beautiful,
and your feelings-well transmitted.
I really enjoyed this!
keep it up!
| nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
This nicely expresses a take on beauty of nature-very beautiful. Great.
| Postscript624 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I think my favorite part was the opening line "The moon hid from me today-"
But overall I love your interactions with your environment. The way you describe how you use the grass was very interesting and expresses something that I can't quite name but can strongly identify with.