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cecyouyed chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
This is awesome.

I love the ryme and rhythm in this.

The imagery is also beautiful,

and your feelings-well transmitted.

I really enjoyed this!

keep it up!
nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
This nicely expresses a take on beauty of nature-very beautiful. Great.
Postscript624 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I think my favorite part was the opening line "The moon hid from me today-"

But overall I love your interactions with your environment. The way you describe how you use the grass was very interesting and expresses something that I can't quite name but can strongly identify with.