Reviews for Time enough
kuronekoevan chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Nicely done. Simple and with just enough depth to intrigue.

My favorite is the fourth stanza. It makes me reflect back on the years that have gone, even so far as to think of history, where so much had changed in just a century. Even though I'm still very young.

Time is indeed an abstract yet real concept, one of the favorite subjects for many poets and authors.
Queen of the Shadylands chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Like the heat poem, it's interesting to think of the different things that you can pull out from one word. I think the first stanza was my favorite.

Here is a riddle I love that connects with the theme

This thing all things devours:

Birds, beasts, trees, flowers;

Gnaws iron, bites steel;

Grinds hard stones to meal;

Slays king, ruins town,

And beats high mountain down.
Alexandrawrites chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
WOW that was awesome, the last line was especially gripping. Great work. :)