Reviews for Soul Bound |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! That was a longer chapter. I still like Decadence. He’s such a badass. I hope the story ends well for them though, without Decadence being bound. Then Hollis would be missing a part of himself. :(Still good job on the description and like always I really like your dialogue. This story seems thought out and seems to be going somewhere (unlike some stories), so that also makes me happy. I can’t wait to see what happens next!_ Silly Decadence and his rules. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, questions arise.:)What will happen next? I like all of his roommates. They have such different personalities, but just seem to fit really well together. Poor Eli though. He may be my favorite side character, but I like Alix too. Heck, I like them all_Anyway, I like how you explained how Hollis was feeling and how he woke up and didn’t have the dream to add to that feeling. You are setting us up for suspense. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Laughs* That last line made me smile. Also, good descriptions and great dialogue. It is very natural. I also like the main character’s voice. He curses and is kind of mean, but in an endearing way. I wish the chapters were a little longer, but great job again! I’m looking forward to seeing what happens. Oh, and I like how the prologue turned out to perhaps be a dream. That was crafty_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was an interesting and humorous beginning to a story. _I like Decadence and Lysander already. Decadence because he’s so feisty and Lysander because he hugged him and said no. I’m really interested to see what happens next. This seems like it will be a really interesting and fun story so I’m going to click the next button now. Great job! |
![]() ![]() When they were fighting i thought Decadence was going to get on top of him and lick him or rape him or something xDD This story is so good keep on writing :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty awesome story. The amount of bloodshed caused by him is pretty incredible and I'm very happy that this guy isn't real! Hopefully Hollis gets to him sooner rather than later! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i so badly want so romance between hollis and decadence! |
![]() ![]() You have no idea how much I love this story. Please update soon! (Also, update Power Trip soon, too. Gotta love Gavin!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually I thought this was more of an informative chapter than a filler chapter. We're finally learning a few more things and it's helpful to move the story along. Keep up the good work and keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() I hope you keep writing. I love this story. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Comedic? Fight? ...okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. It's all starting to make sense! It's interesting to see Hollis and Decandence interaction. I like that they have such a complicated relationship. great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah ha! I figured Lysander and Decandence had had a thing, but this is definately more interesting than I suspected it'd be with the whole demon and angel and human relationship thing. great job and I can't wait to see where you take this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story is awesome its very original! |