I'm loving this so far, you've done a really great job! :D

If you ever return to us Please Please update this story, It's Really Addictive I'm itching for more, the charactors are Fantastic, The Plot you have set up is Great! And your clearly a very Talented Writer! All thats missing from ths story to be Perfect is it updated/completed! I'm very Picky about Demon storys but this has all the makings of a Great read! Please update one day and give us more! It's too sad to leave a story like this unfinished!

Hahaha decadence was desperate for Hollis! Now that's irony! Though they had a sexy sex scene.

Oh please update!

I'm in love with decadence, he's my filthy new obsession. Please continue.

Thank God u put the demon point view which made it so intersting and I love it so hurry up and update please!

I knew he had a relationship with the angel and I wish he didn't because this kinda reminds of a of inuyasha when he was with the past girl and with the future but I'm still enjoying the story so I might as read it still.
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This is sooo funny and I love but I don't if I should say but this is the demon going to die or is he going to stop killing humans? but I keep guessing the end and most of them aren't happy endings but I beg u please make it a happy ending

i liked to see decadence's pov, i think it's interesting to have a limited vision narrative, it makes it so much more real and closer, following that persons senses. when's the next part coming?

Omg I am in love with this story and honestly I hope u continue using decadence's pov from time to time. I agree with you that it does spice it up a bit hope you post REALLY soon : p

"At the back of the fridge I spotted a microwaveable sub-sandwich"

C: maybe you could mention that there was a couple of subs? You make it sound like there was only one and then he has two to eat.

"I turned to look and there, shoved half-hazardly onto a top shelf in the closet, were two dead bodies. I seized, waiting for the stench of blood to attack me once more. But upon a second look I realized they weren't bleeding.

They'd forever curse this house."

C: wait, did he just suck out their souls instead of ripping them up? Explain!

"Dropping my guard around this Demon was probably the most dangerous think I could ever think to do"

C: "thing to do"

Pretty good so far though!

"Here Eli ducked away from the hand on his hand..."
C: " hand on his head"

Pretty good so far!

"His claws were extended and he jumped on the Angel with force enough to know him back."

Correction: 'throw him back'

I hope you are going to continue this story
I am hook an so want to know how it ends