please please, update, this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooo good!
Love it!

Dude luv this gottta continue! 3 D SO AWESOME

hufsij I'd rather only inside Decadence's head once in a while, since I preferred Hollis' point of view much better (more to relate to), but I don't mind this.

wow. so im starting to not review until ive read the whole story, but ohmigawd. i love this story so much3 cant wait till the next chapter

You're going to laugh at me, but I did an actual, honest to god, double take when I saw that it was from Decadence's point of view. I love him so much. Agh! I love how sometimes he's all concerned and caring and other times he's dark and evil. Screw Hollis's soul, Decadence is a freaking sexy beast... Oh yeah, and I always feel the need to add this, (only because you hate it so much 3) UPDATE SOON GODDAMMIT! I need to keep reading this storyyyyyyyy! Don't make me annoy the hell out of you until you do... :)

Your fanfiction is interesting, I liked.

Next?

This is honestly one of my favorite stories currently running on fictionpress... AND YOU'VE STOPPED UPDATING. Think about it?

SEriously, i can only re-read this so many times! please update!

hmm dont know if i like lysander that much... def prefer Decadence!

hmmhmm interesting chapter...

I'm really glad you've decided to write from Decandence's POV because I was really curious about what he was thinking and how he felt about Hollis.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Okay so I started this yesterday at 3am and got to chapter 13 at 5am but couldn't finish it because I had to go to sleep so that I wouldn't be caught XD

I LOVED IT.

DECADANCE IS HELLA SEXY.

I WANT MORE.

That's all I need to say

Your writing style is amazing, there were a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that noticeable. I loved it. Next chappie ASAP!

It's really quite interesting that we see the other side of the story - Decadence's... and not just see thing deteriorate in Hollis' world. But I think it's really nice. Do your best and we'll be rooting for you~

This story is quite funny. It has this strange charm in it. I like Decadence... when he speaks, I imagine him in this frustrated young man voice, which I find very amusing. The part where Lysander was called "weirdo" cracked me up, too. :)

It's okay to have the demon's point of view from time to time but please not so often, I know some fiction like that and believe me it's more good than to read the story from a third person you can't feel really the feeling and the thoughts of the main character but when you see from the eyes of the hero of the story you think it's your life, you live the story. Thanks and please don't be lazy, our job is to read and comment and your's is to write :-)

Hemm! Lemon, thank you

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