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| macabre thoughts chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Eggshells. But don't call it Memories - that one's overdone.
I got a wonderful chilling feeling of this; of a past that's following, 'haunting' as it was put, and inevitably catching up. And of a breakdown. Sometimes only a few words can do more than many, if they're chosen correctly. And I think you have; this is powerful stuff.
| XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
reading this made me feel something...i'm not sure what.
i keep imagining a head cracking open, spilling out goo and little mechanical scraps of junk, and trinkets of all kinds...all casting shadows on each other.
not sure about the title...