Reviews for Middle
lightXdarkness chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
From the moment I started reading this, you had me captivated. You writing style is so personal and detailed. I absolutely love Jamie and I love Rainer's character as well. Heck, I love all of them. They way you present them to each their own personality is something that I enjoyed. You are truly an amazing write. Please, I beg of you, make this into a story, or at least another one shot where the relationship between Rainer and Jamie is more explained.

Actually, I'm kind of confused of the ending. Is Rainer protecting Jamie, going to punish Jamie, or warning Jamie. The ending was like a silent understanding between both main boys and in a way I liked that. It shows the understanding that is only present in a relationship that's been there for a while. Although it is killing me greatly. Please add another chapter to this. XD
nffhkasjfnbsdkjb chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Your style is beautiful, really beautiful. Very sensuous and evocative:) I like how everything ties up in the end with Rainer's bone crunching. And I'm sad for Jamie, he's hot on his straight best friend, and he's the one who fucks up his sex life:P

Kudos

Suki
HIVENET chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
...whoa
whoooaaa
what just happened.
GrangerDanger333 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Wow. Really intense and a great story but perhaps a little unclear at the end. Amazingly written though! :)
The Infinity chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Whoa.

Just...

Whoa.

I really...

WHOA.

...

...

This story was good. Amazing.

I can't say anything else I don't think I can... put it into words.

Much love,
Lil' Monster
Ibbit chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
This was odd. Good writing, short/quick and decent smut, yet such an awful event. It's like stereotypes gone horribly wrong. It doesn't seem that someone would take a risk that big in public just for a quickie. What do I know though? It felt like this story was rushing by. Maybe cause it was suspenseful, maybe cause I skipped part of it and had to go back and reread it.. quickly. Gah, I just can't get over the ending. Good story though. Very good. Scary .

Luck with life and writings.

~ibbit
Desdemonaspazcomcast.net chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Oh... Oh god. That was heavy. That was... So well written and why did it remind me of fight club-ah, wait, that's probably because I was talking about it today.

So sexy and whoa, crazy sensation desperate. I love it. And I'm trying to figure out what Rainer really means by "I take care of my own", and in context it seems to imply that the narrator belongs to him, somehow, and maybe I'm not imagining the subtle homoerotic charge that ran through his reaction?

I don't know, but I like to think it was there.
lizzy93 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
i want more of this story i barely read it bust from what i did it was great u should come up with more of it was hard to stop reading
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
I liked this up until the end, only because I'm not a fan of vague endings. I have no idea what happened.

Poor Jamie, not allowed to be himself.
kazoua chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Ok ok. I have no idea as to was hapenning towards the end (maybe I'm slow) but I freaking LOVED it! Gosh. I'm just a major sucker for, well, stories like this. The characters are a bit pathetic, a bit sad, only a really little bit likable, but awesome all the same.
Rann chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
It doesn't feel finished quite yet. But it was quite interesting
Kinjirareta Ai chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Very good. I like the brutality, and the fierce protection. i wonder if Rainier and Jamie woudl ever get together? Hmm.. I like the story and enjoyed reading it.
Osoi chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Wow, this is really different :) in a good way. I love how this is in present-tense. Good job!
Blind Scribe chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Oh I love this piece.

I like how it's not just smut, and the ending is A-MA-ZING! Great job. Too bad it's only a oneshot though...
fivestar ice chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I seriously hope that this isn't complete. I like your style of writing
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