|Reviews for send the chills down your mind|
| sunstruck chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Wow, you freaked me out too...in a good way. The opening image is so fascinatingly creepy; his lips rolling back - it's like a horror film. Your alliteration/rhyme is brilliant: "i am the hunger, the hunter" and "forgotten - misbegotten". I didn't really get the part about cancer? But that could just be me.
I love the "twist" at the end, too. That line is just the perfect way to end such an unnerving piece.
| paradise street chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Oh, wow. This is so intense and so powerful. Definitely unsettling. I was holding my breath reading all the way through - I think that's a mark of a good poem on a hard topic. Great work.