What a great mini adventure. Very cute romance. Love the pacing, the characters, and the sad ghosts' story. Great work.

AWWW SO CUTE! I'm looking forward to reading the sequels.

Sweet. At least the night in a haunted house was not lost for everyone.
Ghosts and love really mix together well in your stories, even when the ghosts are not involved. I like it very much.
Also, your ghosts seem to differ from story to story, depending on their purpose in the narration I guess. How Anthony would have loved being able to appear in front of Zak, even for a few minutes.
Still, how can a mother do such things to her own children? That's messy.

Hello, hello!

I just finished this last night and I am so so so happy that I found it! I must say, the characters are really interesting, the story is seriously awesome and written in a way to keep me reading. (To be honest, I couldn't stop reading until I was done.) I don't have much to say but: WOW! I'm already reading the sequel now and I'm totally going to read part 3 too! You've got me hooked. I hope this review lets you know how much I liked it!

That was a great story! One if the best ghost stories I've read. Loved it.

WOOO! That was GOOD! I definitely enjoyed reading that! That was tons of fun! Excellent job, dear author. I was thoroughly entertained. In fact, this seems like one of those stories I'll read again in the future. And those are the best kinds of stories. Keep writing! You definitely have a talent for it!

this was awesome. i loved each character and the way the reacted in the haunted house. i grew up in a haunted house and some of the things you see or fail too, are well, stuff that people would only ever believe in fiction and this is one hell of a fiction ;p. i adored this, reece was cute and my god couldn't you just hug sam? awe. and gwen amused me no end. poor evan he is going to have his hands full one of these days. brilliant story, loved it.

I love:

Ghost stories with happy endings.

Cute couples.

Slash.

This had all of them! I'm still smiling from the ending, it was really good.

oh i needed that sweet, happy ending so bad! some parts of the story seriously creeped me out (though i'm on a buffy level on horror things, anything scarier than that and i'm sleeping with lights on for a couple of months!) i really liked how you wrote about anna and her brother, so sweet ) and gwen pissed me off, i seriously wanted to kick her ass! though i would probably be as hardheaded as her if i didn't see proof with my own eyes too..but she was still a bit too much..thank goodness evan seems cabable of taking her on xD

Nice.

Could get interesting...

K, yeah. I wa really scared when the girl showed up, so kudos on great horror-telling skills. Many people lack them.

They make a cute couple. THanks for witing this despite assignments and whatnot. Don't fail them and then go all emo on us, k? We need you as your complete-and-awesome self. If you didn't catch that, it was another way of saying Good Luck on your exams. )

Aw. What a cute ending, both for the ghosts and for Sam and Reese. I quite liked this. It was short and sweet, but well-developed. And they didn't immediately jump into sex, which is always a plus in my book. )

Great story, can't wait for the sequel!

that was adorible! Sam and Reese were just to cute!

Well that was creepy, weird but so CUTE! u just made my day