Reviews for Ghostly White
Vegetarian Meatballs chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
I love rhyming and you did it effortlessly. Nice work and thanks for sharing!
Archia chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
The rhyming is there but it kind of blends into the poem, which I think is really good.'Porcelian skin, like a doll' I really like that line. The way you've described things are really good.
lymli chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
that's sweet, I like the imagery about being chased