|Reviews for Love's Death Warrant|
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Sentimental. It reads like a memory. Maybe it's just my filter, I've seen such cases before. As in, really. Nothing to be proud off, but I think this is so true, sometimes It's better not to love.
I love the last two lines of the whole poem:
"He signed her death warrant with the words/ I love you."
I don't know what to say about that line, but it really evokes a vault of emotions.
The pacing was a little slow, but it's good for a start I should say. Most of all, I streamed through like 10 writes before I stopped before yours. The reason? Simple. Yours had CLEAR, DISTINCT stanzas. The rest came has one whole paragraph, which was really messy. Probably another filter of mine, I can't sit down to read through long poems without stanza breaks, but I can read through an 11stanza (5 liner) poem.
All in all, it's a pretty compelling read, keep it up. And PLEASE DO post up other bits and pieces of your poems for ME to read (:
| Sunshine In A Box chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
i love it SO much how did you come up with the idea is it something your feeling or just something that popped into your head?