|Reviews for Tana|
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
There seemed to be a bit of switch in direction about halfway through this poem. In the first half, it reads like the character was enjoying the other's suffering, and the quick changeover to the opposite seemed a little rough and choppy. This may just be from a personal standpoint though.
Something I see you use in a lot of your poems and I've never liked is '&'. It's much better to write out the word 'and', as it will cause the story to flow better and it just looks messy as it is.
-From the Review Marathon (link in my profile)
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
:( sorry to hear that. I hope things get better for your friend. and you.
| Subbie chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
:é I can relate to this so well...