|Reviews for Legend|
| Marie Watson chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
This is a good story. Quite quaint, in it's own way. A few suggestions though, if I may. You have many grammar errors, as well as spelling errors. I like your idea, it's original, but it seems a bit too fast for the emotions. It was a good idea to make the werewolves make jokes when bringing her home, but I could not picture which type of werewolf you were using. Is it the one that looks human, but turns into an actual wolf? The type that just grows a lot of hair on their bodies? Or is it the type that their bodies stay human, but they have their head turned into a wolf's head? I suggest, as a critic and a proofreader, that you be a bit more descriptive in your next story. You can take my advice, or no. The choice is yours; and, should you ever need help, I will gladly give you my two cents, as long as you request it. Thank you for the lovely story. Can't wait to see more of your work.