Reviews for playing with fire
between stars chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
twin, i will never get enough of this poem. everything is so gorgeous, from your imagery to your symbolism to your comparisions.. i will never ever get enough of this. I love the last line, and GAH could it even get any more perfect? It says so much, yet nothing at all and i could cry at the elegance. i really liked this poem. it's like - one of my all time favourites, and i feel so honoured to know the author.

-bri xox
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Short but simple, awakes really great images. The title makes it perfect :3 the sureness, the simplicity, the perfection, and the danger that can be found in a beginning relationship. definitely relatable.
classic violet chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Wow, short and simple, i like the representativeness it has regarding two people, presumably, in love, well done.
iamnolongerusingthisaccount chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
I like how short it is. It tells an interesting story in only four lines. The description is good and a mental picture comes to mind when reading it. Keep on writing.