Reviews for 42 days 17 minutes and 18 seconds
Datarin chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
It needs polish and real narration, not a drabble of inconsistent thoughts.
Mini26 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
That was good! It's different in a good way! (:
Skye-Nicole chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
update IMMEDIATELY if not SOONER.