Reviews for The Boy and Girl
Wade0112 chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
See the Angel's Necklace for a special announcement for all who review.
Opalstar45 chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
a little vague.. nice though
Jj Smith chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
i think you need to elaborate more and use more transisitions it feels like you go from one thing to another without giving a reason for how or when it happen and the dead fish and mist thing was confusing
Wade0112 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Checked on the just-in page. #7 people. i just joined