|Reviews for Not Just Sticks and Stones|
| mousegirl05 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
This short is so true to life it's heartbreaking, but I'm sure that you are aware of that. I am impressed with how you were able to create a clear atmosphere (and motivation) in so few words. Impressive. There is a lovely elegance about the way you write that I admire very much. It flows. Nicely done. I'm off to look over you page to see if you can hold it up for longer-works too. _~ I sincerely suspect you can.
| Alphearia chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I'm usually not one for reading stories on FictionPress, but this was amazing.
I honestly, couldn't change a thing, and would never dream of doing so.
I, and quite a few of my friends, know how it is to get made fun of and tormented, so I really relate to this boy. But even if I didn't, I feel like I could still know his plight through these words.
| ciscosays chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
been trying to get ahold of you, jonathan.
get in touch with me, please.
| Icy ninja chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
I like the story. I love your details and the way you were able to tuck in info about his life.
I hope there will be a next chapter to this
| MercedesPhoenix chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Wow, I loved this! I hope to hear more from you like this!
Have you ever tried the Ellen Hopkins books? Her stories are on a lot of topics like this. I read them, and I think they are great.
If you can find the time, please review my stories, too. No one has reviewed them yet because their new. Just look for "After The Storm" or "Emerald Spirit".
Hope to hear more from you!