|Reviews for The Garden of Life|
| Timescribe chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Last line's very clever. Reminds me of a comeback poem I wrote to someone who rubbished christianity.
Near the end I had a line
"if my sour grapes gave way to humble pie for my next meal."
| SammieMarie chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
I enjoyed it, i just think the words could use a little more flow, if you know what i mean. Great job, though!
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
''Sometimes I sow ugly words of hate'' Oh how I can relate to that. But we're all only human and make mistakes. Nice piece. Keep it Up!