Reviews for Haiku 3
Alix Cohen chapter 20 . 1/2/2011
Happy new year, Al!

Glad to see you're still writing.

And if you miss snow

Come to my hometown,

or Pittsburgh, where my school is-

there's plenty out here.

Meh. I just got back

from a wonderful week in

sunny Cancun, and

it's difficult to

get used to cold weather

now, but I have to.
nickyO chapter 16 . 12/4/2010
these poems bring the reader into the moment, good, solid work.
nickyO chapter 17 . 12/4/2010
lol, for the first one in this set.
lymli chapter 17 . 12/3/2010
I like the last verse, made ma laugh.
Alix Cohen chapter 17 . 12/3/2010
Interesting use

of the word "noisome." Did you

know it means "smelly"?
Alix Cohen chapter 16 . 12/3/2010
I can see the lights

like that from the Cathedral

It is beautiful.

Been thinking of home

a lot now that it's two weeks

until I go there...
Alix Cohen chapter 15 . 11/25/2010
Watch your syllables-

your very first line has six

or did you mean that? :)

I've started to wash

dishes since I started school

Not my fav'rite chore.

Organizing is

more fun, but you're right, it does

take a lot of time.
Alix Cohen chapter 14 . 11/22/2010
Again with the syll-

ables! "Glaciers" is three

when I read aloud.

But still beautiful...

I love watching stars at home

I knew their names, once.

And ev'ry cloud does

have a silver lining, if

it's only the moon. :)
Alix Cohen chapter 13 . 11/22/2010
Ah! Daffodils and

vi'lets remind me of home-

and bright red tulips

We always have flowers...

now I come to school, wjere the

only color's leaves

and the coat of arms

is flowers on Cathedral lawn

but I miss gardens.
Alix Cohen chapter 10 . 11/19/2010
Where is this place that

you remember from childhood?

Ah, to be so young

and to have your life

unfolding before you; when

I was little, I

knew exactly what

I wanted to do and be.

Everything made sense.
moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Really liked the 3rd Haiku from this set. In particular, the comparison of the dead tree to the bareness of winter appealed to me.
Alix Cohen chapter 9 . 11/16/2010
An odd turn of thought

for you, Al; it's not like you

to focus on death.

It ain't so dry here;

I got out my boots today,

and my umbrella.

I don't feel like post-

ing haiku right hap-

pens to diaries.
Alix Cohen chapter 8 . 11/13/2010
Life so small, and yet

it can see the larger world

and encompass it

in thought-we still sail

by stars that may be long dead

What we see, is real

to us; the stars are

not themselves, but also re-

flect society.
Alix Cohen chapter 7 . 11/7/2010
Crazy little bug

who knows what a moth's thinking?

Certainly not I

What were you reading?

It must have been awesome, to

keep you up till five.
Alix Cohen chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
It sounds beautiful!

I can't see the sunset, ex-

cept from Cathedral.

Can you post pictures?

I miss those colors; all I

see are autumn leaves.
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