So sweet :D I love it :)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
here more dan abut neil nd her i love d thing u showed abut best friends,... love may cum nd go but true friendship is like permanent ...
awesum kudos!

aww..best friend will do anything for best friend :D

so sweet. loved it! thanks for sharing!

awwwwwwww! this was so sweet! a sequel with dalton finding someone? PLEASE!:)

Question: do all your romancy stories have happy endings?

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Yeah, me too. I need to figure out how to break the cycle. :/

Anyway, it was pretty good. I think it was better than the "I got this" one-shot. :)

Dawhh. This was awesome :]] we always love turnarounds don't we. Yeaay :D

I kinda hate Maggie since she broke his heart like that. But, you know, yay for a happy ending. :) Dalton's a good guy, BTW.

Hi. It is so beautiful story and I love it. :) This story is so romantic and so beautiful I ever read it. I love it. :) Dalton and Neil are like brother and so close. Thats wonderful friendship between them. :) I am wonder how old are Maggie, Dalton and Neil? *curiously* I don't know that Dalton do like Maggie so much. OMG Maggie and Neil were dated for two half years then she dumb him for no reason. Poor Neil. :( I am so glad that Dalton ask Neil for his permisson to date with Maggie. Thats so nice of him. :) OMG Neil have nightmare about Maggie. Poor Neil. :( I am so glad that Neil edit the spellings for Dalton. Thats so kind of him. :) OMG Dalton change his mind about ask Maggie. What's wrong? I am wonder why Maggie want to talk with Neil about? *curiously* Aww Maggie and Neil still does love each other. Yay. :D I am so glad that Neil give Maggie another second chance between them. :) Hope that Maggie and Neil will be item in the end. *hopeful smile* I am wonder if you are plan to write Dalton's story in the future? Maybe a one shot story of Dalton and Neil's sister or another girl for Dalton. :) It is amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Keep writing always and don't stop writing. :D

Cute :D

love the story.

I heard the song since I'm a KPop lover .

This made me slightly teary. It's so cute.:) I love it!

His best friend is a douche . what, he realised because his friend slept in one day? God. Bros before hoes, anyone? I have had crushes on friends' exes before but I would never, ever act on them. Seriously. And as much as I'm happy for him he got his girl back :P she doesn't deserve him. She dumped him because she was insecure and she needs to get over that before he takes her back. If she hasn't she's just gonna do it again D: BUT I LIKES YOUR MAIN CHARACTER! And that he's nice! Little too nice!

Hey,

I'm going to give you some constructive criticism here.

overall, I think it was an average oneshot

I don't think him and maggie had enough development - there's not much on the past.

Maggie overall, we know nothing about her.

Tbh in the beginning I thought this was slash, and I had to read the beginning several times to realise this.

Neil actually sounded like a girl O_O

That's my take on it

Nice attempt though!

cuteness overload. me want a Neil for myself. :(