Reviews for Take Care of My Girlfriend
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
So sweet :D I love it :)
heal me forever chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
here more dan abut neil nd her i love d thing u showed abut best friends,... love may cum nd go but true friendship is like permanent ...
awesum kudos!
mia aurora chapter 1 . 5/26/2012 friend will do anything for best friend :D
blackmist chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
so sweet. loved it! thanks for sharing!
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
awwwwwwww! this was so sweet! a sequel with dalton finding someone? PLEASE!:)
literal.semicolon chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Question: do all your romancy stories have happy endings?


Yeah, me too. I need to figure out how to break the cycle. :/

Anyway, it was pretty good. I think it was better than the "I got this" one-shot. :)
ManiacalByMoonlight chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Dawhh. This was awesome :]] we always love turnarounds don't we. Yeaay :D
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I kinda hate Maggie since she broke his heart like that. But, you know, yay for a happy ending. :) Dalton's a good guy, BTW.
Lady of romance world88 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Hi. It is so beautiful story and I love it. :) This story is so romantic and so beautiful I ever read it. I love it. :) Dalton and Neil are like brother and so close. Thats wonderful friendship between them. :) I am wonder how old are Maggie, Dalton and Neil? *curiously* I don't know that Dalton do like Maggie so much. OMG Maggie and Neil were dated for two half years then she dumb him for no reason. Poor Neil. :( I am so glad that Dalton ask Neil for his permisson to date with Maggie. Thats so nice of him. :) OMG Neil have nightmare about Maggie. Poor Neil. :( I am so glad that Neil edit the spellings for Dalton. Thats so kind of him. :) OMG Dalton change his mind about ask Maggie. What's wrong? I am wonder why Maggie want to talk with Neil about? *curiously* Aww Maggie and Neil still does love each other. Yay. :D I am so glad that Neil give Maggie another second chance between them. :) Hope that Maggie and Neil will be item in the end. *hopeful smile* I am wonder if you are plan to write Dalton's story in the future? Maybe a one shot story of Dalton and Neil's sister or another girl for Dalton. :) It is amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Keep writing always and don't stop writing. :D
StaNdUPtomE chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Cute :D
QuirkyDebutante chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
love the story.

I heard the song since I'm a KPop lover .
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
This made me slightly teary. It's so cute.:) I love it!
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
His best friend is a douche . what, he realised because his friend slept in one day? God. Bros before hoes, anyone? I have had crushes on friends' exes before but I would never, ever act on them. Seriously. And as much as I'm happy for him he got his girl back :P she doesn't deserve him. She dumped him because she was insecure and she needs to get over that before he takes her back. If she hasn't she's just gonna do it again D: BUT I LIKES YOUR MAIN CHARACTER! And that he's nice! Little too nice!
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 11/18/2010

I'm going to give you some constructive criticism here.

overall, I think it was an average oneshot

I don't think him and maggie had enough development - there's not much on the past.

Maggie overall, we know nothing about her.

Tbh in the beginning I thought this was slash, and I had to read the beginning several times to realise this.

Neil actually sounded like a girl O_O

That's my take on it

Nice attempt though!
Fayre Meira chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
cuteness overload. me want a Neil for myself. :(
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