| Reviews for I Can Feel You |
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   Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 12 . 5/5/2012 amazing story! I loved the cliffie ending! I think that it would be even better if you added a bit more deatals though. Keep up the great work! Tarah xXx |
| pandakim chapter 12 . 3/4/2012 ahhs. noooo it can't b done yet ahhh cliff hanger ahaah |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 12 . 4/18/2011 Twist! Again! Good read. My plan was to distract myself from studying for final exams and such, but this was definitely not a waste ;) Keep on and never stop writing :) -Sylvia |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 11 . 4/18/2011 Ah. I like the thought Cady doing what she wanted v. what her soul wanted. I was actually going to mention that, but I see you've beaten me to the punch. |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 10 . 4/18/2011 Creepy! |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 9 . 4/18/2011 I find the mythology a little confusing :/ I think just maybe one or two paragraphs devoted to clearly outlining the world and the hierarchy of psychic abilities would do magnitudes for the clarity of the story. But, otherwise, still strong :) Onwards! |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 8 . 4/18/2011 Cliff-hanger! Always a good rhetorical device ;) |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 7 . 4/18/2011 Yay, happy ending this time. Serial killers are depressing :( |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 6 . 4/18/2011 Twist! I run the risk of repeating myself, so I'll just say good chappie and move on ;) |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 5 . 4/18/2011 "Fine, 350 for each day and night you stay here from here on." "And you accuse me of being a scam artist." lol! Too bad this didn't get R-rated ;) Onwards! |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 4 . 4/18/2011 Good chappie. Same comments and critiques as before, but staying strong, and I'm still reading ;) |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 3 . 4/18/2011 Hot. How can a girl not love a bad boy? It's impossible. One thing I would like to see: the dialog makes this move very fast, sometimes hard to keep up with. It'd slow things down a bit if you took a paragraph or two to explain the mythos of the world you've set up. But otherwise, I'm still reading. Onwards! |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 2 . 4/18/2011 This is not what I expected! I don't usually read psychic stories, but it's an interesting viewpoint and a nice spin to murder-mysteries (which I can't tell if that's what this yet). I really like the mythology that you've set up. It's interesting. Beware everlasting battle between 'your' v. 'you're'! Onwards! |
| asklefjaeihog chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 "I was expecting to find a friend." Oh. Burn! I really like first chapters to start off the way this one does. That is to say, they aren't dull and explanatory, and they start right in the middle of the action. Very nice. It will keep me reading ;) |
| violet-eyez chapter 12 . 3/22/2011 so are you going to write a sequel to this story? |