Reviews for Forward Motion
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
The way you write these kinds of subjects is so impressive. It really feels like unrequited affection from the authors point of view. Moving on is always easier said than done, I guess. You had some great lines in this piece, I was particularly impresses with the final stanza.

Great work, and it's nice to see you updating regularly (my inbox is full of alerts regarding your posts).