so simple! I love your haikus, but this one especially 3

This is an impressive poetic attempt to get into a fish's mind and view its surroundings as it does. Good haiku.

Btw, did you know that there was an old west outlaw named Sam Bass? I wonder what bait the lawmen used to hook him.

That's a pretty heavy name for a gold fish - destingusing the name of the great 'basstard' and all.

I like the observation you make here, the glimpse into what seems like an isolated little bowl, is infact a great expance of space to a small fish. Nicely done, keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.