|Reviews for lilith|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
i love the whole thing, it goes so well. my favorite: "you've got the whole world in your hands/ but you don't know what to do with the damn thing,"
| SandPaperWishesAndDreams chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
you are fantastic.
| Kobra Kid chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This was good! I don't know what its about, but that's what I like about it. It makes you ponder and attempt to interpret what you're saying. I also like the narrator's voice, very strong and straight-forward. Keep on writing!
Shayyde from the RH
- Can you please payback via Rise From The Ashes? Thanks so much! :)
| seredemia chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I LOVED THIS. I had a feeling this was about god and religion and how he's not there? I really liked the strength in this piece and there so much EMOTION in it. I actually kinda agree with you on most of these things... I do wonder too why the third paragraph had capital letters whilst the others don't. I think it makes it look more important, more powerful so it stand out. It's a nice effect. I dunno if you were going for that, but yeah :P Anyway, like I already mentioned; I LOVED THIS. I love how you said the univers can slip right off our hands. Really liked that part :D