Reviews for I Understand You, We're Similar Us Two
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
"too cold to lit the match"... light

"its unfair"...it's

"its hypothetical"...it's

I like the rhyme scheme. It worked well and didn't seem forced at all. The repetition got to be a bit much with the "i understand you" TWICE every other stanza. I think just once would have worked. I also really liked the ending. Very sweet and hopeful. Nicely done.

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Hawk Mage chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Aww such a sweet poem! I love it! Kinda reminds me of something I went through just a few years ago. It's good to see you writing again! (Probably don't remember much of me. ;)