|Reviews for Shade's of heat|
| Queen of the Shadylands chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I love the way that a simple word can have so many ideas and connotations to it, all of which you take for granted untill something happens or something is said to make you think about it. 'One man may melt a block of ice
Fifty pound's a day, that's nice;' I got a little confused as to the meaning of these lines and I thought
'There's the warmth you will find comes from inside
Like that glow that you cannot define' broke the rhyme scheme.
I think liked the end lines most, very thoughtful.
-Queen of the Shadylands (where it may always be shady but I assure you there shall be a warm welcome should you ever visit)