Reviews for Tomorrow's Visitor
pygmy owl chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I totally love your writing! This is really cute and funny.
Ras chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
You really are the master of snarky banter.

I knew 'kindness gives birth to kindness' was a quote but I needed google-fu to find out it's by Sophocles.

... Do song lyrics count as quotes?
silly1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Me, I thought the facebook comment was the best! "I'm anti-social, not Amish." Best part of the story!
Stormyclouds chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I loved it! Super cute, I have to favorite it! -
Carson Jean chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I love your writing so so much, and this was so so cute, i started it before i went to school and i was anxious to get home to finish it

I hope you keep writing forever and one day publish books

awesome job
br0kenkisses chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
CookieWonderhead chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Brilliant. Really.

It was long, very long but as it was mostly in dialogue, it was easy to read.

Congrats, it was wonderful
Datarin chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I thought some phrases were out of place, but yeah, definitely saw quotes. Maybe not all, but there were a few. Some parts were a little throwoffish, especially when Tommy mentions "facebook". I still like it. Not the best out there, not horribly original but heartwarming.
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