Reviews for Desire
AuthorNinjaEarth chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Man, that's rough; but I know that from experience all too well! Excellent work!
Mienaku chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I'm not sure what is about this poem but I loved it. The cadence gets a little off in the second stanza, but it works in with the overall theme. Very well done.
lymli chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I like tism especially the starting.