|Reviews for the girl in the sea|
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
This poem is beautiful and pure. I love every line as it is so simple yet so descriptive in the words you use. I can't really name one bad thing about it. I love it.
| AilenNinja chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This is very good! I truly enjoyed it!
My only suggestion is capitalization.
But other than that it's fantastic!
| ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
| AuthorNinjaEarth chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Wow, quite a gal! Loved the way you described her! Maybe she's a mermaid LOL (joking). Excellent work!
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
"there is a girl in the sea,
who smells of lavender and rosemary,
the waves washed her back to me,
all glittery, and cold," - really loved those delicate lines. :)