|Reviews for The Ghost|
| Luis chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Your poem is good. Join us.
| charlesoblack chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Just about perfect.
No other words needed.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
That was a very wwell-writen and interesting poem. I like how it is from the point of veiw of the victim. The last part:'He hears my words above a shatt'ring roar
And as the lights cease to be.
I say, "You've murdered me once before
But you will never, ever be rid of me."'was perfectly creepy.
| Majorjewls chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Really well me goosebumps!:)
| xKatie Raex chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I cannot BELIEVE I haven't reviewed this yet.
I have read this maybe a million times, and it is wonderful, I love it!
| MoriMorte chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
and that's all the Natzi's ever saw the jews and they're prisoners.
raised as Hitler's youth brainwashed and trained so that they wont have a problem killing them and doing much worse things than that.
i wish u luck on your writing!
| trouble-makerz-4ever chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
that was so x 1trillion good. i love your use of description. you are a very good writer.
| KalliopesMuse chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
This is truly haunting. The flow of the poem was very good and I especially liked this line: I saw in him the living Devil,Now he thinks the same of me.
Well done and happy writing. - Sarika
| castaways and cutouts chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
wow. really good. really REALLY good! major props!
| Black CrystaI chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Wow. This poem is written really, really well. It flows so naturally and not a single rhyme sounded forced.
| tpaca chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
Awesome. I am in awe. wonderful job.
| Pinkmoon chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
I love this style. As I was reading I keep thinking that this was simlur to Edgar Allen Poe's poems. Anyways, great poem.
| i Kandi chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
i enjoyed how you had the ghost tell the story... i also liked the way that we saw the pain on both sides, and the possible remorse? not delving too far into it, i like it, plain and simple :)
| completely neutral person chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
That poor general!
| Heinrich chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
Wow. That was amazing. I can't over it. That is the best poem I've ever read-Ever.