Reviews for The Ghost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just about perfect. No other words needed. |
![]() ![]() That was a very wwell-writen and interesting poem. I like how it is from the point of veiw of the victim. The last part:'He hears my words above a shatt'ring roar And as the lights cease to be. I say, "You've murdered me once before But you will never, ever be rid of me."'was perfectly creepy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really well me goosebumps!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot BELIEVE I haven't reviewed this yet. I have read this maybe a million times, and it is wonderful, I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING ! and that's all the Natzi's ever saw the jews and they're prisoners. raised as Hitler's youth brainwashed and trained so that they wont have a problem killing them and doing much worse things than that. i wish u luck on your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so x 1trillion good. i love your use of description. you are a very good writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is truly haunting. The flow of the poem was very good and I especially liked this line: I saw in him the living Devil,Now he thinks the same of me. Well done and happy writing. - Sarika |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. really good. really REALLY good! major props! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This poem is written really, really well. It flows so naturally and not a single rhyme sounded forced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. I am in awe. wonderful job. ~*rachel*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this style. As I was reading I keep thinking that this was simlur to Edgar Allen Poe's poems. Anyways, great poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed how you had the ghost tell the story... i also liked the way that we saw the pain on both sides, and the possible remorse? not delving too far into it, i like it, plain and simple :) |
![]() ![]() That poor general! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was amazing. I can't over it. That is the best poem I've ever read-Ever. |