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Just about perfect.

No other words needed.

That was a very wwell-writen and interesting poem. I like how it is from the point of veiw of the victim. The last part:'He hears my words above a shatt'ring roar

And as the lights cease to be.

I say, "You've murdered me once before

But you will never, ever be rid of me."'was perfectly creepy.

Really well me goosebumps!:)

I cannot BELIEVE I haven't reviewed this yet.

I have read this maybe a million times, and it is wonderful, I love it!

AMAZING !

and that's all the Natzi's ever saw the jews and they're prisoners.

raised as Hitler's youth brainwashed and trained so that they wont have a problem killing them and doing much worse things than that.

i wish u luck on your writing!

that was so x 1trillion good. i love your use of description. you are a very good writer.

This is truly haunting. The flow of the poem was very good and I especially liked this line: I saw in him the living Devil,Now he thinks the same of me.

Well done and happy writing. - Sarika

wow. really good. really REALLY good! major props!

Wow. This poem is written really, really well. It flows so naturally and not a single rhyme sounded forced.

Awesome. I am in awe. wonderful job.
~*rachel*~

I love this style. As I was reading I keep thinking that this was simlur to Edgar Allen Poe's poems. Anyways, great poem.

i enjoyed how you had the ghost tell the story... i also liked the way that we saw the pain on both sides, and the possible remorse? not delving too far into it, i like it, plain and simple :)

That poor general!

Wow. That was amazing. I can't over it. That is the best poem I've ever read-Ever.