|Reviews for The Piano|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I think, maybe because it was so long, it would have been better if you'd varied the punctuation at the end of each line, or used none at all. To begin with it had this dramatizing effect on each line, but there comes a point where it becomes a little too much, with me automatically pausing at the end of each sentence for a little too long, and makes it flow a little less nicely.
The beginning was beautiful, because I was still fully taking it in, and I just read the ending again and that paired beautifully with that beginning and with the emotions in my head and heart. Lovely writing :)
| Archia chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I really liked this. There are so many different aspects of poetry that it makes it wonderful. I like how you don't stick to one style of writing.