Reviews for A Walk in the Woods
inkmind chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This was a very interesting story and I was yet again amazed by your use of vivid imagery and description. The only thing that I think could be improved is that the story feels like it was taken directly from the assignment and typed up. I think that it could be an even better story if you were to revise it. I especially liked the descriptions of the entryway of the mansion. Congratulations on your teacher's reaction by the way.
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I love how morbid the ending is!

There were a few paragraphs towards the end that all start with "She", and this makes the writing seem a bit repetitive/choppy.

Also, most of the sentences are the same length, which adds a bit of monotony to the piece, so if you were to break them up or combine the ones you can, it will help the flow.

Overall, though, this is a really lovely little piece of description, and the story in it is unexpected! I liked it. :)

~M
A.E. Reed chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
M... creepy! Loved it! So cool, I had chills running down my spine!