Aw, this story was so SWEET and ADORABLE. I loved it! :) It's a shame you're not updating this anymore but it's ok. We all have our own lives to worry about. It would be cool though if you updated it again someday?

I love the story. I read it as if it was real... I couldn't comment much but I love it. I just hope that you would finish this story..

WRITE MORE PLEASE!

CLIFFHANGER AND NEVER UPDATED WHY

The Ending Will Make You Swear Like Never Before And Scream In Disappointment but The Rest Was Amazing :D

Hello all! Thanks for all the wonderful reviews; it really validates the time and effort that I put into my work when I read such kind words from readers like you. It's not said often enough, but it really is appreciated; at least, I know that I appreciate it.

For those of you wondering why I decided to stop writing this story, it's because I dedicate the majority of my creative time writing screenplays now, and this story would not have been given justice by the very little time and energy I would have been able to dedicate to it. I would rather end a story prematurely rather than half-ass my way through it just to say I finished it.

So thanks again for the kind words, and I apologize for leaving the story at such a cliffhanger ending. Look for very slow and gradual updates to my new story, Stan's Inn, as I find time in between writing my screenplay to get new chapters finished.

Thanks again,
Justin

Why would you not finish such an amazing story? I wish there were more "gay love" stories like this on FP. It isn't about the sex but the emotion. You convey these feelings to the reader magnificently. I don't know if everyone truly understands how difficult this can be- (or am i the only one who has a hard time with it?).

WHY? How can you stop it there? This story is amazing. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. Honestly, i think its publishable.
May i ask why you decided to stop writing it?

Gosh. You're a great writer..!

I thought all stories were complete on this site or is the author giving us a cliff hanger? If not, what happened? If it is the end, I don't like it.

Oh my god, way to leave it at a cliffhanger like that, I do hope you will update soon although it has been a while... .

But great story! Definitely a lot more substantial than many of the stories I've read on here... I love your concept of what love is, and the way their relationship is evolving. Also, it's great how you left the descriptions of them having sex out (what a tease!), but it really downplayed the sexual aspect and focused on the emotional aspect of the relationship. Great job and hope you continue!

I really love your writing style :) Its the type of writing that just sounds beautiful when read aloud :) And also you get bonus points for having Doctor Who in there :D hehe :) Good story :) I cant wait to read more :)

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I'm officially addicted! Please update soon. It reminds me of my gay young adult story "All i ever wanted"

But yeah, great emotional stuff so far. good writing. hot characters. i like.

oh wow what a way to leave it. how exciting ! can't wait for the next part. i mean ... haha what could she have to say ? well obviously you know :) no fair keeping it a secret . can't wait for the next chapter :D

the story is super awesome and i'm so going to check out the books in the foreword and read them (thanks for the reading recommendations)can't wait to read more ! .