I really liked it, very intricate in the way you wrote it. You used words so craftily :)

this poem is fantastic i swear it sounded just like one of those poems written by someone really famous excellent work really i love this poem it makes me wish there were more writers like you

"Truthfully, and justly/ I wish you would die"

BEST. LINES. EVER. They really ended the poem well.

Nice work.