|Reviews for Little Less Than Sober|
| TheLastFireBender chapter 25 . 2/25/2011
| sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
gah. stupid guys. :)
| JaredDean chapter 25 . 1/29/2011
All in all, I really liked the whole story. Thanks for sharing.
| Gnarsoph Kham chapter 25 . 1/22/2011
This was an amazing story! Every time I got the email that a new chapter was up, I'd drop whatever I was doing, hang up the phone, and start reading. I'm glad you had the work ethic to get it finished, and wish you the best of luck on your future endeavors.
I just want a favor. Wave for me when you're being interviewed for a bestseller, please?
| Andie chapter 25 . 1/22/2011
OMG, Dukie! I LOVED it! At first, I didn't expect there would be pregnancy and all and I kind of didn't like it, but in the end, it was AWESOME. I liked how you made a lot of problems for Cady and Beck, but then they would still be together. I loved that! And Dayton, too! Even though I feel bad for him. :) Love it and keep it up. :-bd ;)
| Brightheart chapter 25 . 1/22/2011
i loved this story so much, but i wish the ending could have been elongated and more happier as to what would happen in their future.
thanks though for this wonderful story.
i loved it.
| Charlotte94 chapter 25 . 1/22/2011
Wow, that was a good ending. And unlike lots of other stories where the ending and the future for two characters seems absolutely perfect, this one helps to show that actually Cady and Beck will argue and bicker and fight about somethings but they will always fix it. It's actually really realistic and I love it more and more!
I agree with the whole no sequel thing, it just wouldn't work for these two. However, you could right something about what happens to Dayton or Sarah, only relating to Cady and Beck.
Okay so I'm practically spilling my mind on this story and really all I wanted to say was, Well Done and thank you for your story keeping me on the edge so many times after midnight and making me sort of regret reading it at 6 in the morning! LOVE THIS!
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 25 . 1/22/2011
Hi. Its beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG Sarah broke up with Beck. I am wonder why? :S I am so glad that Sarah is being honest with Candance. I like her and I am glad that she want to be Candance's friend. Yay! :D OMG Tarryn wants to be friend with Candance again? :S I just wish that Candance should attend to college to get better life for herself and her daughter. Its just shame that she waste her chance for not going to college at all. :( I am so glad that Candance attend to Mack's party and finally to be give another chance with Beck now. Hope that she and Beck should work out together. :) It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. :) Let me point you out about few things. Epilogues can be happy or tragedy or sad endings. Sequels are continues of series. Please do not judge on other people or their stories. I suggest you should read books are, 'Gone with the wind', 'Romeo & Juliet', 'West Side Story', 'Walk to Remember' and 'Looking for Alibrandi'. Read them and see it yourself. So not all end can be happily. Sometime it can be sad, tragedy and emotional ending. Think about it. Hope that your stories will have epilogues. Good luck with writing. :D
| FutureMrsWeasley chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
I have been reading your story, and I realized you use the word whenever in the place of when.
"Whenever I heard Beck's Car pull up..." instead of when. I think you have very developed characters. Keep Writing :)
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 24 . 1/22/2011
Hi. Its so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so glad that Sarah took Beck with her for holiday trip because it will help him to figure out why Candance came home earlier from NY. :) I am so glad that Candance agree and let Dayton to visit her. Hope that it goes well. I just don't understand why Candance don't realize that Beck always pick second girl in his life and he is just jerk guy to her. Why can't Candance realises that its time to let him go and move on with her life? Poor Dayton. :( Its her choice of her heart that she can still love Beck and get hurt all time or learn to love another guy who always be protective of her? Thats her decision to make. If she don't fix the problems and she'll regret it herself. Think about it. Mack and Dayton are right. Candance is too blind to see the truth front of her nose. I think Dayton or Josh is perfect man for her. :) Hope that her dad will come around to help her and support her. It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am off to read the next chapter now. :)
| 3H chapter 25 . 1/21/2011
Here's what I see. They finish up high school and start college. Still they live seperately, until they decide to move out into their own little apartment, trying to act as adults and act like the family they are. Marriage doesn't cross their mind, they're so focused on working, school and Hollyn. Yes, Sarah becomes a good friend and even helps Cady when Dayton becomes interested in her again. Maybe Sarah and Dayton start an awkward friendship. I see Cady's dad reappearing, not getting back with her mother but working to keep a healthy relationship with her, Cady, Hollyn and Beck. Upon thinking she maybe pregnant again, Beck finally pops the question. Of course she says yes, then she reads the pregnancy test and its negative. They both sigh in relief. The end. Hee 's what I see nothing fairtale like but a beautiful struggle that they would happily live through again.
| Clarise is too fine chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Hi! I'm new on this website, but for the past few days I've been reading your story, Little Less Than Sober. I LOVE IT! I love everything about it. You're a great writer.
| LatinSpice chapter 24 . 1/20/2011
i hope he stays out of the way.
Now I like Mack's idea of making Cady talk to
Beck about her feelings. I need them together lol
| Charlotte94 chapter 24 . 1/20/2011
I have been reading this for so long, I'm looking forward but slightly hoping that the end doesn't come, just because it's an end to something beautiful. Hope you don't mind my 'soppyness', feeling a little sentimental. Hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I did reading it, and hope to read some more stories from you. Charlotte x
| Soonafter100 chapter 24 . 1/20/2011
I like it, I think u did a really greta job! post soon!