Reviews for Phantom
The Kid From Cyrene chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I LOVE THE PROLOGUE. AWESOME, MAN. TOTALLY. AWESOME.
deactivated20172203 chapter 4 . 11/7/2010
Interesting plot, I can't wait to read more :D
tifa chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
awsome, could some changes, but I really like the story plot and can't wait for the rest of the book to be finished! :D I think you should type more before you let the story out cause some of it doesn't make sence. like in the prolouge, you described her feelings right before she pulled the trigger, and then in chapter 2, you said that she pulled it without knowing what she did. good work though!
D.Cold chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Please carry on :D

~LTBB~
What Happens Now chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
Ok this is developing I think, but you should mash some of these paragraphs up, when theyre all one lines it seems kind of unecessary. Good JOB
What Happens Now chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I must say this has drawn me in, I like it
CurlsOfGlory chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
You've got me hooked! Please write more