|Reviews for An uncommon caricature of a sleeping man|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Review Marathon this weekend! (link in my profile)
"the slow swan song of your rem sleep."... REM
The word choices in this piece are really great. In the first line "unshackle" was a great choice to describe it. "the tepidly lackadaisical mosaic" was a great choice of words as well.
Another part I liked was "The slow quickening of bones fluttering." That was a beautiful image.
The whole piece is really beautiful and well written.
| lymli chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
that's true, everybody got a ugly monster part inside and it's ironic, but so tempting.
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
you are the best