Oh hell, did that asshat say to Valerie what I have a rough idea oh what he said? Oh hell no! This is making me uncomfortable, not that I'm gonna stop though.

I love Valerie! She is awesome! But if she was real she would scare the crap out of me!

Go stepmom! Woot!

Is all this stuff normal in where this story is set? Cause if I was at a ball place and that stuff was happening and a girl sId she was Cinderella I would've cried and laughed at the same time.

I guess I sorta get it, but I actually really like it, I don't care that I'm partially lost.

I am Hellas confused, did I like, miss something? Or am I supposed to be confused, nevertheless, I am.

Lauren DM Smith-

Oh, you are EVIL! You've done it now! What did you mean, ending on a cliffie! Arg!

On a different note: Love the story!

Thanks,

Zeus

Valerie has a sword and knows how to use it, how can she be kidnapped? I was expecting one of her sisters to be used as bait or something.

Wow! I love this story! It keeps getting better and better! I don't know why, but it makes me feel happy reading it. It is by far the best fiction press I have read! Please update soon!

~Zeus

Sweet, we'll finally get to see where Darren comes from! I can't wait to see how Valarie reacts to it.

Ok it's getting better and better every time you update. I know once this story is finished I will end up going back to read it because I love it so much.

I love your new summary and I'm glad I read this story. It's not the stereotypical "Cinderella uninterested in romance meets Prince Charming." The characters are all consistent and there's no unnecessary drama. I'm looking forward to your next update.

Go Darren! Someone had to give that Douche a piece of his own medicine!

SO... It's past her graduation now. Will she go with him or not?

Oiiiiiiii, I'm a Christian and I have gay friends. Not actually offended, but a bit irritated by the stereotyping. I highly appreciate Darren's appearance on a horse, it was unexpected and greatly amusing.