Reviews for Cinderella vs Prince Charming
SweetlilSunshine chapter 37 . 7/29/2011
A horse? lol He DOES know how to make an entrance, now doesnt he
SweetlilSunshine chapter 36 . 7/29/2011
I wonder, will Darren come to the graduation? And if o, will she invite him or will he come on his own?
Alicat05812 chapter 36 . 7/29/2011
Ok the story is starting to get really good. I'm starting to get really excited every time you update a new chapter. Just a few questions I don't know if it would bug you that I ask, but is Val ever going to actually agree to go with Darren to Armith? Also why is Darren so hesitant to talk about his sister?
SweetlilSunshine chapter 35 . 7/28/2011
I knew she couldn't resist him for long! :D

and won't Kiara see those banners too? She does work in the same place as Valarie.
Lemony Desserts chapter 34 . 7/27/2011
please update. I beg of you. Valerie begs of you, so she can kick kiara's ass. Darren begs of you, so he can get his next chapter and hte chapters after that where he successfully rides with his princess into the sunset, laughing all hte way. Lyel begs of you, so he can hurry up and go see his fiance. Err (i dont know hw to spell his name its just to long) begs of you, so you can write how he is now as strong as ever, and can fight with a dagger. I beg of you, so I can go cheer GO VALERIE GO! GO VAL GO! KICK KIARA'S ASS! GO VAL GO! VALERIE GO!

SweetlilSunshine chapter 34 . 7/27/2011
Go Valerie! WOOT!

I wonder what Darren will come up with to apologize.
Lemony Desserts chapter 26 . 7/27/2011
oh mai...

wow... I like this chapter... hahaha! My friends are like that with me... Just not that that way hahah!

It's fnny, i like htis Zach charachter... hahaha!ROFLMAO!


ah mai...
NYR chapter 8 . 7/27/2011
She seems more like a Rose Red to me.
NYR chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
I love Miss Congeniality! It's sad how he dumps her in the second movie, though.
Lemony Desserts chapter 6 . 7/27/2011
wait wait wait... how does darren know that Val really is his princess? it could just be anyone claiming to be a princess/cinderella! im confused...
Becca118 chapter 32 . 7/26/2011
I've just read your story through from the beginning and I have to say I love it! The story line is brilliant with the modern twist and your grammar and spelling in general is pretty much perfect. If I'm really fussy I noticed one instance when you'd written "your" instead of "you're", but apart from that I haven't spotted any mistakes, so well done :)

I look forward to any updates!

Becca x
SweetlilSunshine chapter 32 . 7/26/2011
O.O what did Kiara tell him?
SweetlilSunshine chapter 31 . 7/25/2011
I have to say that even though he said she was going to hit him, she didn't get furious like all the other times. She's starting to like him isn't she?

I can't wait to see where this goes!
SweetlilSunshine chapter 30 . 7/25/2011
Awwwww, Daren has a soft side :D

I love ur story above the heavens above right now, update soon. I proise u I will be reading!
Alicat05812 chapter 28 . 7/20/2011
Ok I love this story. Write more soon please.
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