Wow, a sword for a Christmas present...that would be one of the greatest presents I've gotten, haha :D But since I have a baby brother, that wouldn't be good to have around _

Anyways, another great chapter :D

Aw, how nice, they are getting along rather perfectly. Yeah, thanks for the update. I hope you update really soon!

LMFAO, I've got to say, the ending was totally my favorite! :D Great job!

The only mistake I caught was at the bottom when Darren retorted "You're a hilarious." when it should be "You're hilarious."

Besides that, great~ :D

I guess Valerie does have Cinderella in her. She just doesn't know it yet. Or even notice. lol. I bet that after Lyel and Erramun comes back from their shock, they are going to make Darren blush. lol. Anyways, update soon! Love this chapter. Whatever happen to that girl that fainted?

Aw, they are bonding! Yeah! I still hold my bet that it's Darren's cousin who sent those Joalm after her. It's just my bet because who knows Darren and who knows that he has finally found his princess. The only one who knows are his worker and his cousin. I don't think that his workers will tell on him because they are loyal, right? lol. Anyways, thanks for the update! Update soon!

Wow, that was amazing. You did a freaking great job with the fighting because I can really imagine it in my mind. Thanks for the update. I'm moving on to chapter 15!

Oh my gosh, this story has just been AMAZING! Super exciting and I can't wait to see what happens at the hospital if anything :D

No jealousy or anger! I love Val. I just love her. She is so funny. Only she would look at a girl hugging her soon to be husband and laugh. lol. Anyways, love this chapter. Hope you update soon!

Wow, what a freaking new change! I love it! Thanks for updating so quick. I think I have a feeling of who hired that Joalom thingy. lol. I'm thinking it's Darren's cousin. lol. Anyways, update soon! Happy writing!

I like it! Please write more. :)

I feel so much sympathy torwards little Darren. I can't believe that Val is acting that way torwards him. He is so cute sometimes with his macho man-ness. lol. Anyways, I hope that Val will change around and see him as not the annoying fairytale man. Anyways, I hope you will update soon again! Happy writing!

Whew! You just changed the whole Cinderealla and Prince Charming thing and I like it. lol. I hope that you can update soon! I really want to know if Darren would anger her more oftenly when she comes back or will he mature. lol. Anyways, Update soon! Happy writing!

Aww, we don't get to see any of her school life? I was kind of expecting Darren to stake out Val's school or something.

I can't wait to read more -

Grr... that Amot. D: Great chapter full of action and I wasn't expecting the prince's Darren's reaction at the end D