So far I find your story very interesting, but I have had some issues immediately recognizing when a scene changes. I usually have to re-read parts to understand what is happening when I get to one. If you could put some noticeable breaks between scenes I think it would help. Keep writing and I look forward to seeing this story unfold! )

haha so who's this Amot guy?

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Ali

Haha still loving it :)

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Ali

I'm so glad you're posting again! You've been missed and this new story definitely has me intrigued.

haha cute chapter :)

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Ali