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Brendan Rizzo chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is good so far; I can tell that this story is going to be fast-paced. There is a reference to the implants mentioned in the summary, which is good as it makes the readers curious about that plot point. I wonder what the characters' society is like, as it is a bit difficult right now to tell if this could conceivably take place in our world. But anyway, the writing is not bad by any means.

Good luck,