Reviews for Weep
Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Fabulous haiku. I love how you were innovative with the idea of crying. I haven't seen crying referred to as Tsunami before, an ocean plenty of times. I also really enjoyed how the poem was talking about crying but there was no sense of depression or morbidness within it- I like that a lot. Nice job.
lymli chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
wow, I like the imagery, sometimes feels are so strong that are like a tsunami