Reviews for Consistency of Real Love
heal me forever chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
I would love to read more about them. They are fabulous *.*
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I really thought this was really cute! I loved the ABC theme you had going on here it must have been pretty difficult to come up with something for every letter. I loved how we got little chunks of the relationship-really, really well done. It was choppy without being overly choppy, if that makes any sense. Anyway, great work!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
I really loved this one shot and I hope you will write more with these characters in the future!
stuck in bed chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Hi! Your story has been added to the One-Shot category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:

This SKoW prompt winner describes the relationship between Rachel and Ethan. Through the use of twenty-six words, every small detail about dating and marriage is described and the result is an incredibly sweet story detailing the difficulties (‘Young’ and ‘Vanity’), the bad bits (‘Beginnings’ and ‘Lost’), and the romantic parts (‘Rain’ and ‘Gondola’). It shows the ‘consistency of real love’, that no matter what happens, as long as you’re with someone you’ll love, it’ll all be okay. And that, warms your heart.
Fantasmic chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
No wonder this story won SKOW. It isn't just some kind of wonderful, it IS wonderful! This is the kind of love everyone dreams of. Well done.
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Awww! Really cute!
A Catholic Girl chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
AHHHHH I'm worshipping at your feet now. It was so good yet wonderful and cute and mature all at the same time, and not cheesy at all! Ahhhhhh I'm at a bit of a loss for words, well done!
anitsirK chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I WANT MORE! Hahahahaha! Good story, well-written and the form works! :) But I wanted closure. So I really want to read more about them. :D
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Oh my god. That was adorable. 3
Ceri Anne chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This was brilliant, there were so many emotions thrown at you! I would love to see more of these characters - although if he does actually die, I will not be impressed!
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
i really liked this, and more so because it isnt in chronological order:D good writing!
xxcubanangelxx chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
That was one of the cutest one shots I have read :)
sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wow. Great oneshot. all the snippets make up a wonderful story. :)
thisfairytale chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
SO. VERY VERY SWEET! I am blown away by this story. Because their love just shines through the words. Definitely not sappy at all. And gosh, i can't think straight to form coherent words thanks to this story 3

Would like to know what happened to Ethan at Young though D: PLEASE SAY HE'S ALRIGHT.

And of course, would love to read more about them! Anytime, anywhere
HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
This is a really cute one-shot and it's very well written. I love how you have a short memory for every letter of the alphabet.

Just a few things that I think could be improved. The timeline is a little too random and jumps around too much. One second they're married and suddenly they're not. I know you said that it doesn't matter to the overall story, but putting it in order would work miracles to this story.

Also, 'Young' was a confusing. What happened to Ethan? Does he die in the end? Are you going to write a follow up for them? I would love to see more of Rachel and Ethan!
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