Reviews for Consistency of Real Love
HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
This is a really cute one-shot and it's very well written. I love how you have a short memory for every letter of the alphabet.

Just a few things that I think could be improved. The timeline is a little too random and jumps around too much. One second they're married and suddenly they're not. I know you said that it doesn't matter to the overall story, but putting it in order would work miracles to this story.

Also, 'Young' was a confusing. What happened to Ethan? Does he die in the end? Are you going to write a follow up for them? I would love to see more of Rachel and Ethan!
youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 7/30/2011

I'm a terrible cynic about love lasting and marriage and things like that and although I don't agree with your point of view, I can't help admiring how you managed to encompass all the little good things about the married life that so many people seem to forget. That was wonderful. I loved it.

Just a question though: I didn't understand what happened at 'Young'. What happened? Did Ethan have an accident or something? I think you should have followed that up a little so that it makes sense, otherwise we'll all be wondering whether he died or not or what!

In any case, wonderful story.
mgouda chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
this is really one of the cutest stories i've read in a while :D

and yes, i'd really, really love to seem more of Rachel and Ethan; they're just too adorable.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
That's very sweet -
Ribena chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
More rachel/ethan please! :) awesome one-shot
Katey chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Love this!
K-t chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Hello! Wonderful story, Ive enjoyed it many times ;)
Caity chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Hey! I love this so much, I've read it at least three times. Amazing truly. It feels so real. So I thought, after my third time reading, I owed you a review. Maybe I'll do three.
JustPlainJane chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Amazingly written! This story really is a winner (Congrats by the way :)). I really loved and enjoyed reading this!

Great job.
soapsnsuds chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
this is gorgeous and totally deserving of its award. it's so poignant and sweet. congratulations to you and more power to your writing. the literary world is seriously benefiting from your works :)
kmdoodles chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I loved it! I am not normally crazy about date-jumping stories,but this was fantastic! The flow was easy to follow and actually worked so well, I couldn't see it written any other caracters were easy to identify with, and enduring to the reader. I look forward to a continuation of the story.
ThereAfter chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Um... I don't even know what to say. Maybe I'm in love? No, I'm definitely in love. This story was utterly and completely amazing. I love what you did with these two characters. Heck, I even love what you did with characters like Caroline and Rachel's dad. There is something about drabbles (or any good short story really) that really hits me where it counts. Every little scene between these two was wonderful and made me smile like the closet romantic that I am.

Honestly, I which I could give you some criticism, some way to get better but I truly can't. There was one point where you wrote 'her' instead of 'he', but other than that, I have absolutely nothing.

Congrats on an amazing story. It was an awesome read!
x Farii chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
You did the time line randomly. It was difficult to figure at first but hey, i got it eventually :)

I really like this. Incredible, really. I'd love to see more of Rachel and Ethan.
Charlette chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This was such a cute one-shot! I especially liked the section on Xenophobia. With all the sevens :) I'm definitely up for seeing more Rachel and Ethan :D
Vee11 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
is there an ending in here? What happens to ethan?
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