Reviews for The Hallway
enchantedflowers chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow...amazing. I like it. :)
disused account chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Really glad you're still writing. I really like poems that end on a sadder note without being too forced. this is one of them.

Write on,

Lee/Adam

PS: would love it if could review a poem of mine.
lymli chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
it's very sad as you stay looking...

everybody could realte.