|Reviews for Moonlight|
| FreezingRayne chapter 39 . 2/17
Yes! Getting tested together is very important. Gad they're doing that, although I'm sure whatever magical screening procedure they have to do will be able to tell Izeri's a were.
| morningstorm70 chapter 39 . 2/16
Man such a tease. LOL
can't wait for more
| Guest chapter 39 . 2/16
Question: Do you live in the Pacific Northwest US? Because it sounds like you are having the EXACT same weather as me. Then again, it's absolutely nuts everywhere this year, so you could be in Arizona for all I know.
Cute/awkward chapter, if agonizingly short. It's been a while since I read BW, but I don't remember Darike having that much of a role in the story... it's good to see him broadened here though. Still anticipating Izeri's bloody confession already. This fae is gonna drive me nuts.
| FreezingRayne chapter 38 . 2/4
Hmmm...with any other characters (like *cough* Jak *cough*) I would say I DEFINITELY know what the surprise is, but not so with Charias. I'm curious.
Great chapter, as always.
| FreezingRayne chapter 37 . 1/22
Hmmm...interesting development! Zaiden is such a shit. I love it!
| Lerene chapter 37 . 1/20
Hmm, I'm wondering if Zaiden is using Darike like he seems to be with everyone else. Or does he really like the fey. Hmm, you have me thinking with that surprising twist. Cant wait to read more. Love this series. :)
| RedValley chapter 37 . 1/20
omg, this is the biggest twist I have ever seen! Darike?! of all fey? I never expected that. This has be the dictionary definition of deception. Now I'm really interested in a Zaiden story. I mean you've wrote that guy from the viewpoint of at least three people and he comes off as a jerkass and a heartless bastard but I never thought this side could ever exist in him. He might be acting, I hope he's not.
| CemeteryLight chapter 23 . 1/8
Omgggg in BW Maika and Akitra kept stealing some of Jak's foood awwwww.
(...I got really excited...)
Poor Charias D:
| Lerene chapter 36 . 1/6
Love it. Great chapter. Made me. Made me smile
| Honunjama chapter 36 . 1/6
Ah love the conversation with Jakil, very funny. I don't remember Maika seeming so out of it in Broken Wings from Jakil's POV (though I may be remembering incorrectly) so this seems like an interestingly fresh perspective. Also, really enjoying the convergence of storylines :)
Look forward to more.
| FreezingRayne chapter 36 . 1/6
I laughed all the way through this. I love how Jak-who seemed like such a good guy in Broken Wings (compared to Maika and Akitra, at least)-seems like such a tool from Izeri's perspective. It's very obvious that he means well, but he is not very sensitive.
I liked the little moment between Maika and Jak at the end, since those of us who've read Broken Wings know that Maika never tops with Jak.
| Honunjama chapter 35 . 12/24/2013
Ah, 'wing-porn' made me smile, nice:)
| FreezingRayne chapter 35 . 12/23/2013
Oh no! Fucking Jak, lol. I love Jak, but he can pretty self-absorbed. I love seeing all of this from Izeri's perspective-all of his biting internal monologue. In Broken Wings, he seems very innocent and sweet, but I suppose that's how Jak sees him.
I also love how no matter how much he claims to hate the faerie bullshit, Izeri still very much acts like a Fey. Always weighing and calculating, and how he initially decided to be Jak's friend because he just seemed like the simplest candidate.
| Honunjama chapter 34 . 12/14/2013
I loved their spirit conversations added to the mix! XD Really enjoyable chapter,enjoying the way they are learning to understand one another.
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
Okay, so first of all, I really do like Moonlight. :) Knowing that this fic is going to update can make me Mondays easier to bear. (Even if it's only every other week.) I've re-read it a bunch of times while waiting for updates.
However, there's one little thing that bothers me about this chapter. When a guy is aroused, the path to the bladder shuts off so that they will only ejaculate sperm, so Izeri peeing and then getting himself off is technically not possible. I'm sorry, I remembered this from Biology and it was bothering me! The rest of the chapter is really good, but that part kept taking away from it every time I read it, so I figured that I should say something.