That scene where Izeri just let his feelings flow out onto the page while crying was beautiful. He is quite negative, and the fact he's not entirely motivated to do the right thing but admits that seems to add dimension to his character.

I can't wait for this to go down! I've been waiting for what words he would use to explain himself for ages! Then again if he simply transformed Charias would put everything together himself.

Damn now that's a romance fic I'd like to read! Sticky and Xakryn! Wow!

That last exchange with Akitra and Izeri was funny. Feys can be so sassy. Still think Izeri should go were and kill him though.

Oh my god it's Izeri's lucky day actually! Turn into a shival! Kill Akitra! Quick!

Dammit Izeri. Where are your priorities at? Like Charias will be miffed sure and I imagine at worst he would go on break with Izeri, but he LOVES him. Izeri leaving would be tragic. Not that Dark would be really helping him off-world, more like kidnapping and taking to his rape dungeon.

Yay miracles. I bet Maika was jealous cause Izeri might get his wings back but he can't.

Yes that was great! 8)

It's good Tessex apologized but he's still shady, changing the marks of a student, entraping and bullying. Oh well it's good this happened.

I keep imagining what I'd do if I was Izeri and crazy. Pretty much just get up in the middle of assembly and transform on stage, maybe eat the dean.

Awww, these boys. These last few chapters have been PAINFUL, to the extent that I've been putting off reading this one until now because I had 4 exams last week and I don't need the stress - I read to unwind. Now, with them done, I feel like I can read things that make my heart hurt again. And...my babies! I'm crying!

I know they're gonna sort it out in the end, but THEY don't. That's why it hurts so much.
...They are, right? Jak isn't THAT oblivious? They do sort it out, don't they? Please?

I didn't think I'd like this story but I found myself enjoying it immensely. It's been very interesting to see everything from Izeri's point of view and I'm really hoping you show his reaction to the relationship between Jak, Maika and Akitra. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

I enjoyed this story very much. I read Broken Wings on aff, this is very interesting to read after that. I an sad to see this story end so abruptly. I hope I can find more of it somewhere or that you will be posting more. Thank you for sharing. Xoxo Robin

Silly and sappy Izeri. Someone nust have planted that idea about make-up sex in his head. :)

I am glad that at least Charias is trying to move past his hurt and feelings of betrayal.

Thanks for the update.

WOW THE END OF THIS CHAPTER, YOUR AMAZING I LOVE EVERY PART OF THIS BOOK KEEP IT UP! WOO GO YOU! PLEASE CAN CHARIAS AND IZERI MAKE UP OH MY GOD THEYRE SO CUTE I CRY!