Aww I love Charias and Izeri! I hope you update soon!

You know that sad noise? I made that. Poor Charias, I get some kind of hug withdrawl if I don't get enough physical contact. That would be a total nightmare for me. Also Izeri's still, at least to me, something of an awful person. I mean, your ONLY FRIEND (love interests don't count) is going through that and you're swimming and breaking into conservatories? What the hell is wrong with him? He's a terrble friend; he is the scum of friendship.

Do you yet live? ;) Just wondering, it's been a while. I'm starting to go into withdraws. It's not pretty over here, shaky and all that. Hee, hee. Anyway I'm looking forward to more.

I don't think I could love them much more if I tried :) I hope you're able to update this soon as I'm eager to see them slowly get closer and closer.

They are too cute! I want to snuggle them. It's so obvious that they like each other at this point, but Izeri is in some serious denial.

I like seeing a softer, more vulnerable side of Charias. He really is just incredibly lonely and it's awesome seeing him slowly opening up to Izeri.

I'm absolutely loving watching Izeri and Charias' relationship develop. I really loved them together by the end of BW and the new details and interactions make me happy in the face :D

I'm so excited to read about everything from Izeri's POV! I'm excited period that this sequel of sorts even exists :)

I had guessed pretty early in BW that Izeri was a shival because of his coloring and how he reacted to Zaidan's pants, but then he was turned into a wereshark and nothing ever became of it. It was him after the party that went after the vampire horse, right?

I'm interested to see how he can be two animals now that we'll see everything from his perspective.

I am in awe yet again, you are a truly fantastic writer and I can't wait to see what will come next!

Sooooo Tessex is pretty much a doucher Charias-wise. But nice in that he helps the Selkies. Andddddd oh, how I love Charias. His broodiness makes my day.

I am in awe yet again, you are a truly fantastic writer and I can't wait to see what will come next!

As a reader I spend a lot of time searching for a story that has the perfect level of anticipation for character romance balanced against plot- I don’t find it very often, I can probably count the stories that have it on the fingers of one hand, and I read a lot. But Moonlight has that perfect level. I almost wish I hadn’t started reading it until it was finished, I am terribly impatient, and now I am held in unbearable limbo (but in a kind of nice way;p). I’m not sure if I would have felt the same for this story if I hadn’t read Broken Wings first, because throughout I was intrigued by Izeri’s and Charias’ relationship, and their getting together was sort of skipped, but it doesn’t matter. Both stories are far better than a lot of fiction I have paid for and I would be willing to pay for both of these if you release them in e-book format.

There are so many details that hook a reader and draw them in to the world you have created- Why the mist? Why does prof. Dark act so strangely? What happens to the disappearing students, Moonsinger etc? and more. Broken Wings had my stomach dropping with each twist!- I think it is details like these that a lot of writers forget. Both these stories are unputdownable, and the potential for spin offs and sequels is immense.

Thank you

Suki x

"He didn't seem to care that Izeri's glamour was about as useful as a mermaid in a crying contest." I absolutely love this simile, if you ever do decide to cut this chapter I really hope you try to fit it in another spot somewhere in the story! And I also really hope you don't decide to cut this chapter, although repetitive, it does give a new insight to what was going through Izeri's head, and gives the story the ability to be read without having to read BW, which is always nice.

You are doing a fantastic job with this, and I really can't wait to finish it, thank you!

great chapter.

That teacher is such a douchebag. .

That was amazing!

They are soo cute together...

See ya.