Reviews for Ashes
I'll Break Your Heart chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Great job. I rarely find poems on here any good. I did 2day. :D
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
The beginning is great, it makes you keep reading, and the imagery describes it well. Nicely done. :)
lymli chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
that's right, not everybody could be forever.